初一英语作文模拟题:我最喜爱的电影

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

Hello,boys and girls!My name is Jenny.I‘m 14-year-old.My birthday is on October 31st.I‘m a movie fan.I like action movie and science movie. My favorite actor is Jackie Chan.He is a great action actor. He has many movies . For example.The Around the World is 80 Days,Rob-B-hood and Rush Hour.These movies are very excited I really like Rob-B-hood very much,because they are exciting. I like action movie movies very much.