过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了。
My busy day Yesterday is my busy day .Yeasterday morning,I wet up very early to runing outside for half an hour,then I began to do my homework when I came home,after that,I went to buy food in supermarket,then I make a good meal for me when i came home,after dinner,I was reading a book for a while,I went to bed at 9 pm and had a sound sleep.