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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文中词汇使用较丰富，高级词汇使用要加强；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
My name is Lucy and I come from the UK.The other day,I have been interested in Chinese culture from some ancient materials.When I was a girl of seven and visited China once and this was my first time to know that how this country was.So I decided to learn more both Chinese culture and local language.By the end of the year,I will be thirteen years old.I hope I can find a new girl friend of my own age in China.I only speak English,but it's not a problem, we can talk to each other.Up till now,I studied a few words of the chinese,such as:hello,goodbye.As you all know,however,I am only a primary school student and the chinese is very difficult to foreigners.I have a lot of hobbies exciting:sports, music, movies.If you want to make friend with me,please send a letter to me.I will really glad to receive it.
