文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Good friend I have a good friend called Cindy. We often do homework together after school.She is a girl had long beautiful hair.And she is thinner than me.But I'm taller than her.We both like reading classics and listening blue songs.We also have some differences in living habits.For example, she prefers to be outside rather than be at home.However, I'd like staying at home to read and sleep. She often says that I should do more sports to put off.Although we have many differences,we are still good friends.Because we attach great importance to knowing each other rather than having similar hobbies.This is my good friend , do you love her?