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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36953
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

Good friend I have a good friend called Cindy. We often do homework together after school.She is a girl with long beautiful hair.And she is thinner than me.Nevertheless I'm taller than her.We both like reading classics and listening to blue songs.We also have some differences in living habits.For example, she prefers to be outside rather than be at home.However, I'd like staying at home to read and sleep. She often says that I should do more sports to put off.Although we have many differences,we are still good friends.We attach great importance to knowing each other rather than having similar hobbies.This is my good friend.Do you love her?

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