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Good friend I have a good friend called Cindy. We often do homework together after school.She is a girl with long beautiful hair.She is thinner than me.Nevertheless I'm taller than her.We both like reading classics and listening to blue songs.We also have some differences in living habits.For example, she prefers to be outside rather than be at home.However, I'd like staying at home to read and sleep. She insists that I should do more sports to put off.Although we have many differences,we are still good friends.We attach great importance to knowing each other rather than having similiarties.This is my good friend.Do you love her?