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My Busy Day Today is January 25th,it's a really busy day.At 8:00,I have a English lesson,I don't like English,it's boring!After that,I have music lesson.I like it very much,it's so relaxing.I have lunch at 12:00 at school.My classes finish at 13:00. It't a really busy day!tttttttttttt ttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt ttttttttttttttttttttttt ttttttt tttttttt t ttttt ttttt tttttttt tttttttttt ttt tt tttttttt ttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt tttttttttt tttttt ttttttttttttttttttt