正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
My Busy Day Today is January 25th,it's a really busy day.At 8:00,I have an English lesson,I don't like English,it's boring!After that,I have music lesson.I like it very much.it's so relaxing.I have lunch at 12:00 at school.My classes finish at 13:00.Oh!After class,I usually play basketball with my classmate,and sometimes with my father and brother.This is my busy day.