单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;文章组织结构良好;句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例。
I have a good friend,he is my best friend,he's name is Li-wei Bo.He likes watches TV very much,he doen't like to learn.He is Mai-hong Ting teacher's son. I often playing with him,sometimes I fight with him(play),I am play with him very happy.He is two years younger than me,I'm ten years old this year,he is eight years old this year.