文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文章衔接手法恰当;句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩。
I have a good friend and he is my best friend,he's name is Li-wei Bo.He likes watches TV very much,he does not like to learn,but he is Mai-hong Ting teacher's son. I often playing with him and sometimes I fight with him(play),I play with him very happy.He is two years younger than me and I'm ten years old this year and he is eight years old this year.