如若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
I have a good friend and he is my best friend and he's name is Li-wei Bo.He likes watches TV very much but he does not like to learn but he is Mai-hong Ting teacher's son. I often playing with him and sometimes I fight with him(play),I play with him very happy.He is two years younger than me and I'm ten years old this year and he is eight years old this year. I love him very much but he don't like me.