单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
I have a good friend and he is my best friend and he's name is Li-wei Bo.He likes watches TV very much but he does not like to learn but he is Mai-hong Ting teacher's son. I often playing with him and sometimes I fight with him(play),I play with him very happy.He is two years younger than me and I'm ten years old this year and he is eight years old this year. I love him very much but he doesn't likes me.