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文中从句过少；单词拼写做的很好，但文中词汇表达贫乏；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。
英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 查词 - 翻译 - 写作 - 排行您好 棒棒唐糖 消息(0) 设置 退出 建议 公告 常见问题 分享到: 您现在的位置:写作首页>写作批改 清空 I have a good friend and he is my best friend and he's name is Li-wei Bo.He likes watches TV very much but he does not like to learn but he is Mai-hong Ting teacher's(she was my first grade teacher,I'm in grade two now) son. I often playing with him and sometimes I fight with him(play),I play with him very happy.He is two years younger than me and I'm ten years old this year and he is eight years old this year. I love him very much but he doesn't like me. 分数评语： pigailogo 53 词汇: 句子: 篇章结构: 内容相关: 评语： 采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中从句数量过少；文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了。 按 句 点 评 1.1 I have a good friend and he is my best friend and he's name is Li-wei Bo. [句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查。 [搭配学习] 动名搭配 have...friend 在语料库中出现过 8 次 1.2 He likes watches TV very much but he does not like to learn but he is Mai-hong Ting teacher's(she was my first grade teacher,I'm in grade two now) son. [搭配学习] 动名搭配 like...tv 在语料库中出现过 14 次 2.1 I often playing with him and sometimes I fight with him(play),I play with him very happy. 2.2 He is two years younger than me and I'm ten years old this year and he is eight years old this year. 3.1 I love him very much but he doesn't like me.
