七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

句法知识较好，但需加强句式变化；文中词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。

Sam get up at six o´clock yesterday.And riding bicycle to park,he fell so happy.At the aftermoon,he has gone to McDonald’s having dinner with his partents .Sam with his classmates playing basteball from five o´clock to six o´clock at the school.At the evening he go for a walk with his father,his father buy a CD to him .So this day very happy with Sam.