湖北洪湖市2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中考试英语作文及范文:我的班长

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩。

My Monitor My monitor,his name is Li Qiang ,12 years old.He is not tall with short hair,and loves wear white clothes because he is neat and courteous .He is so sunny and friendly with us,often helps some students improve their academic record when they are not confident in their studying.we all think he is a good monitor,and we all like him as well.