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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；可适当增加从句的使用，注意几处句子错误；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。
My hometown is Kunming,Yunan,on the southwest of China,it is a very beautiful city,local people called it "spring city" because of its good weather all a year.I am living in Kunming now.After a heavy snowing,the weather turns sunny and warm .In such sunny weather,people usually go to shopping,outing,enjoying their dinner altogether and have a happy times.
