从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
Sam had a good time yesterday.He got up at six.Then he rode his bike to the park and enjoyed himself there.At noon,he had lunch at McDonald’s with his parents.In the afternoon,he played basketball with his classmates at school.And they were so excited that they played it till six.After dinner,he went for a walk with his father.His father bought him a classical CD.