采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;复杂句采用很棒;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇。
hello,my name is Lucy King, I am come from UK and I can speak English,I 13 years old . I am a high school student.I think China is a beautiful country,I looking forward visit China, so, I want to find as same me age and same my hobbies girl,I like play basketballs and listening music and watching movies with my parents, I introudus myself how about you,please tell me your information.thank you