初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

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I have a dream.I want to be a white collar.Because I think it's really interesting and challenging.I will hard-working.And always let me look calm.I think it will improve the boss of my affection. I believe I will success.And in my efforts,I will have a rich life.This is my ultimate goal.I will to my dream and efforts, refueling, I can.