作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;文中从句数量过少;上下文衔接手法不熟练,没有能够有效的使用衔接词。
Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday morning. Then went to park by bike, he had a good time in the park. he ate lunch with his parents in McDonald's. Them he played basketball with classmates in school in afternoon, since four o'clock till six o'clock. After dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father, and his father bought a classical CD for him. What's a nice day to Sam.