单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;很好的运用了从句,但部分句子稍有瑕疵;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
Our Monitor is a girl, her name is Wang fang she has a pair of black eyes, and has black straight hair,she is very nice and she always smile.she likes wear a red skirt,she likes help classmate,when some one has any questions she always help, she is strict by herself,she study is very hard, we love her