2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

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I'm a student from Xing Guang High School and i'm a reporter for this active.now,i'll told the active to yours. First of all,the compitation will be hold in Daqing mountain on june 30th in the moning. Our students will go to Dangqing mountain to take part in the shool hold a active,which is a clambing compitation.By the way,it is the first time that was held by our school.devoted to among my classmates happy as well as excited. in my opioion,the active be able to incress the same gossip with each other as wll as our teachers.which are improve our outdoor'view.Last but no least,our classments all grow in the active.who are reword more and more fanny and more and more happily.Be based on some reasons who are vary support the active and so on.