2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者词汇积累很好，不过单词拼写方面要继续努力；注意句式在文中的变化，加强一些从句的使用，文章会更棒。

I'm a student from Xing Guang High School and I'm a reporter for this activites.now,i talling the activites to yours. First of all,the competition will be hold in Daqing mountain on june 30th in the moning. Our students will go to Dangqing mountain to join an activites,which is a clambing competition.By the way,it is the first time that was held by our school.devoted to among my classmates happy as well as excited. In my opioion,the activites will be able to incress the same gossip with each other as wll as our teachers.which are improve our outdoor'view.Last but no least,our classments all grow in the active.who are reword more and more fanny and more and more happily.Be based on some reasons who are support the active so much and so on.