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Uncivilized behavior often can be seen in everyday life. some students always talk aloud in library. some jump in the quene in the students dinning room. What's more some students spit on the floor. Above the behaviors, have some causes resulted in. Firstly, many students are lack of morals, which is the necessary to be improved. Secondly, we all should observe the rules. Thirdly, we should have a sense of becoming a civilized person.