正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达多样性不足,在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
I've met my best friend since I was fourteen. He is a tender guy,very careful to others.We always share our ideas to each other.we can talk for couple of hours.He's moved to Canada when he was sixteen.I missed him very much after he left.Now we chat online.But I don't have the chance to see him.