作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
I've met my best friend since I was fourteen. He is a tender guy, care about others.We always share our ideas to each other.we can talk for couple of hours.He's moved to Canada when he was sixteen.I missed him very much after he left.Now we chat online.But I don't have the chance to see him.