- 分享到:
作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
Sam is my good friend. He got up at six o'clock yesterday. Then he went to the park by bike. He had a good time in the park. At noon and parents eat lunch at McDonald's. Lunch is chicken, cola, French fries, very delicious. Sam and his classmates play basketball at school, basketball is his favorite sport, from four pm until six pm. After dinner, Sam and his father took a walk together, and his father bought him a classical music CD. How interesting the day is Sam!
