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My family name is Lucy, the name is King. I am thirteen years old, is a school in the UK - this is a beautiful school, there is a traditional British style, I love it very much. My country is British, I am a typical British, but I am very much in love with the overseas chinese. I very much respect the Chinese culture, it is so profound ah! So, I want to find a Chinese pen pal, she is best and I like sports, music and movies. I am very eager to listen to Chinese songs with her, playing badminton, watching the most popular movies in China!