高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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Palying football is my favourite bobby. I falled in love with football by chance.on an usual day I picked up a football on my way home,and my friends and me began to play it,from then I began to love playing football.I often play football with my friends and we were training together. The favourite football player in my deep heart is ~.I always look forward to being a professional football player in the future