小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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MY GOOD FRIEND My good friend is MIKE DONG .He is a boy,he is a handsome boy.He has big light eyes,and the mouth are light red.One day, he goes to school early,I ask him:"Why are you go to school early?"he says:"The bus come early, I go to school early.It is late I go to school last." I am not really see that means I just sit down.Long time go, to the test.The write a composition "My best friend"I think I write Mike ,because he's use his best for me,and he is practice makes really.