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we have all kinds of delicious dumpling at laosi Dumpling House , Here , the dumpling are big and nice now we have two great specials speical 1 has only vegetable and is just yuan for 20, Special 2 has beef and vegetable and is just 5yuan for 20 Welcome to our dumpling house .. Our address is 234 Heping avenue our telephone number is 1212121212 thank you for coming