正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。
Xiao Ming is my good friend. He is a boy. Xiao Ming is a 160cm tall. He is thin, and dark hair, round face, big nose, long legs. He likes sports and films. We often go to play basketball and soccer. Every weekend, we go to cinema together. He lives in Beijing yet. We are classmates.