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Xiao Ming is my good friend. He is a boy. Xiao Ming is a 160cm tall. He is thin, and dark hair, round face, big nose, long legs. He likes sports and films. We go to play basketball and soccer. Every weekend, we go to the cinema together. He lives in Beijing yet. We are puples.