正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
Xiao Ming is my good friend. He is a boy who is a 160cm tall. He is thin, dark hair, round face, big nose and long leg. He likes sports and films. We go to play basketball and soccer every month. Every weekend, we go to the cinema together. He lives in Beijing now. We are colleges. He is better than me in English. He studies hard and likes help other students.