小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

Xiao Ming is my good friend. He lives in Beijing now. We are colleges. He is a boy who is a 160cm tall. He is thin, dark hair, round face, big nose and long leg. He likes sports and films. We go to play basketball and soccer every month. Every weekend, we go to the cinema together. He likes cinema that is in Korea. He is better than me in English. He studies hard and likes help other students.