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My favorite movie Since i was 6years old, i have a hobbit, that is movie. When my parents work at day, my favorite thing in the house is regard the movie. I regard 60movies differents, there are movies about love, action etc. but my favorite movie is intouchable, this is a French movie about friendship. This is very touching, a friend ship about a rich man and a negro. There is two type life, but they meet by fate.