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Xiao Ming is one of my best friends. We are puples. And we study together since 2010. He is study hard, so he is a good student. He is 18 years old and 170cm tall. And he is long hair, two big eyes, big nose, little mouth and long leg. Beacause he is very handsome, lots of girls that is my classmates like him. Xiao Ming likes sport and films. He likes football, basketball and tabletennis. Every weekend we have lots of things. We go to cinema in the moring. Then we play basketball in the afternoon. At last, we have supper together in the evening.