小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Xiao Ming is one of my best friends. We are pupils. And we study together since 2010. He is study hard, so he is a good student. He is 18 years old and 170cm tall. And he are long hair, two big eyes, big nose, little mouth and long leg. Because he are very handsome, lots of girls that is my pupils like him. Xiao Ming likes sport and films. He likes football, basketball and table tennis. Every weekend we have lots of things. We go to the cinema in the morning. Then we play basketball in the afternoon. Lastly, we have supper together in the evening.