正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
Xiao Ming is one of my best friends. We are pupils. And we study together since 2010. He is study hard, so he is a good student. He is 18 years old and 170cm tall. And he is long hair, big eye, big nose, little mouth and long leg. Because he is very handsome, lots of girls that is my pupils like him. Xiao Ming likes sport and films. He likes football, basketball and table tennis. Every weekend we have lots of things. We go to the cinema in the morning. Then we play basketball in the afternoon. Lastly, we have supper together in the evening.