过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;注意句式在文中的变化,加强一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;作者词汇表达的灵活性要加强,且注意拼写错误。
I have a goodfriend.Her name is shelly.we met each other when we was in middleschool.We graduation from same school and get into different Hight school,but it dosen't influnce our friendship.i don't good at communicate with persom, but when your meet someone is right,you needn't do anything that your will be attract by each other.