初一英语作文模拟题:我的理想

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩。

I have a ideal that I want to be a teacher when I grow up.Why I want to be a teacher but not doctor or engineer.Because of I admire my teachers very much,they not only know much,but also very kindly.No matter what questions I asked,they will explain well to me.I think if I can to be a teacher one day,I will treat my students as my child.I will learn more and find a good way to teach my students.