句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇,但请认真检查词汇的拼写。
I have a good friend. Her name is shelly. We met on the high school. We graduation from same school and get into different Hight school,but it dosen't influnce our friendship. i am not good at communicate with people, but when your meet someone is right,you needn't do anything that your will be attract by each other.