小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，高级词汇使用稍显不足；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

I have a good friend. Her name is shelly. We met on the high school. We graduation from same school and get into different High school,but it dosen't influence our friendship. I am not good at communicate with people, but when your meet someone is right,you needn't do anything that your will be attract by each other.