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小学二年级英语作文:My Favourite Teacher

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:40浏览次数:2403
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用英文描述下你最喜欢的老师.字数在100字以内
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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So far, my favorite teacher is my English teacher during my college time. Her name is Ouyan. Why is she? First of all, she encourages us that everyone can study English well. It made us more interested in English learning. And we all improved our English quickly after a term. Second, she taught us many skills to learning English, and she helped us with our homework after class usually, if we have something wrong with our homework. Last but not least, she is both kind and intelligent. Everyone likes to stay with her at every moment. In a word, she is my favorite teacher in my past time and my future.

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