小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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This is my new teacher. He is a man and teach my English. He is 35 years old and 180cm tall. He is thin and short hair, round face, small mouth. He is every handsome. He have teached English since 2012. He had lots of students. Some of them he had teach had good achievements. He likes reading in his spare time. I hope to make a good study with he helps.