小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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This is my new teacher. He is a man and teach my English. He is 35 years old and 180cm tall. He is thin and short hair, round face, small mouth. He is every handsome. He have taught English since 2012. He gratuated in Beijing foreigin's Leaguage Collage in 2001. He had lots of students. Some of them he had taught had good achievements. He likes reading in his spare time.