小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，且检查文中的拼写错误；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

This is my new teacher. He is a man and teachs my English. He is 35 years old and 180cm tall. He is thin and short hair, round face, small mouth. He is every handsome. He have taught English since 2012. He gratuated in Beijing foreigin's Leaguage Collage in 2001. He had lots of students. Some of them he had taught had good achievements. He likes reading in his spare time.