小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

This is my new teacher. He is a man and he taught me English. He is 35 years old and 180cm tall. He is thin and short hair, round face, small mouth. He is handsome. He has taught English since 2012. He graduated in Beijing foreign's Leaguage Collage in 2001. He had lots of students. Some of them he had taught had good achievements. He likes reading in his spare time.