2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，另外还需加强拼写检查。

The Mid-Autuman Festival The Mid-Autuman Festival was fall on lunar calendar August 15th which the moon is brigest in the year.The Mid-Autuman Festival was chinese traditional festival which both of us celebrent with family. In this time the traffic system is crowed, because no mater how long or how busy we are, both of us with come back home with family.enjoy the beautiful moonnight sence and eat the Mid-Autuman cake also have family reunion dinner.enjoy the time stay with family. In Mid-Autuman Festival we also have travel and visit friend. The Mid-Autuman Festival is reunion time.