从句使用量太少;文中拼写错误比较多,同时请注意积累词汇量;层次不够清晰,文中很少使用衔接词。
Sam got up at 6:00ap yesterday. He went to the park by bycle, he had fun there. He had lunch with his parents. He played basketball with his classmate from 4:00pm till 6:00pm. He went for a walk with his father, and his father buyed a classical music CD to him . Sam had a nice day!